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她的臉上露出了一抹微笑,嘴角微微揚起,眼睛也跟著彎了起來,看起來非常開心快樂。8964 copyright protection105PENANAKEUfpoFyYh 維尼
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她嘴角輕揚,眉眼彎彎,神色顯得異常愉悅。109Please respect copyright.PENANA7sc6hrlsC4
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「嘴角輕揚」、「眉眼彎彎」、「神色愉悅」,三者都在描寫開心的神情,略有重疊。可依風格選擇保留兩項即可。8964 copyright protection105PENANAVRoC2gYaXF 維尼
**「異常愉悅」**語氣稍正式,若想走柔和路線可以替換成「滿是喜色」、「帶著歡意」之類的詞。8964 copyright protection105PENANAMCYjxqlxjh 維尼
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範例一(簡約柔和):109Please respect copyright.PENANAWPqNNtNtOq
她嘴角微揚,眉眼間滿是喜色。8964 copyright protection105PENANAKoykgyQpHG 維尼
範例二(偏古風詩意):109Please respect copyright.PENANAbAfBuFnKTY
她一笑,眉眼彎彎,神情恬然喜悅。8964 copyright protection105PENANA7jgG4vMqHQ 維尼
範例三(保留你原本的語感,小調整):109Please respect copyright.PENANA7xrODcOaeb
她嘴角輕揚,眉眼彎彎,整個人透著歡喜。8964 copyright protection105PENANAR99GQH7Akw 維尼
二.原句練習題:8964 copyright protection105PENANAwQsLJEm9UY 維尼
凌晏如站在窗邊,靜靜地站著,什麼話也沒說,只是默默地望著窗外的天空和雲朵。109Please respect copyright.PENANAqowY6BwO4z
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凌晏如神色沈靜如水,只是靜默地望著窗外冰冷皎潔的月光。109Please respect copyright.PENANA3B35uEMOxB
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◎可以優化的細節:8964 copyright protection105PENANA7njPpiSxiS 維尼
**「神色沈靜如水」**語意完整,形容恰當,可保留。8964 copyright protection105PENANAJk50gwwx4P 維尼
**「靜默地望著」**與「神色沈靜」語義有些重疊,且「靜默」與「望」常連用,可簡化。8964 copyright protection105PENANAxSALiRF95a 維尼
**「冰冷皎潔的月光」**畫面有,但「冰冷」與「皎潔」在語氣上可能稍有衝突:一個是觸感(冷),一個是視覺(潔白明亮),可以選其一或換句話更貼情境。8964 copyright protection105PENANAg0Nv5r1BVu 維尼
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範例一(簡潔內斂):109Please respect copyright.PENANABWNeUtA5dM
凌晏如神色沈靜如水,凝望著窗外的月光。8964 copyright protection105PENANAY4GvGv4U3u 維尼
範例二(詩意版):109Please respect copyright.PENANAGu8SIQGdRi
凌晏如神情澄靜,望向窗外皎潔如霜的月色。8964 copyright protection105PENANAhFH6kzvx6I 維尼
範例三(保留冷感):109Please respect copyright.PENANA7sKrhqkf2g
凌晏如神色如水,靜靜凝視著窗外冰冷的月光。8964 copyright protection105PENANAtRIMrKjZMg 維尼
範例四(古風柔化版):109Please respect copyright.PENANAlUGaRQv3KE
凌晏如眉目寧靜,望著窗外清冷如霜的月華。8964 copyright protection105PENANAkIGKWvfKhA 維尼
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需待持續練習~若之後有練習會再分享幾篇我與AI練習的紀錄109Please respect copyright.PENANAwflJAH9mcs
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