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一點點不專業小意見【原來同性戀不是錯】

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一點點不專業小意見～～

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我是邊看邊紀錄的，比起說是書評，應該更像是讀後感想吧？

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反正都是類似的東西差不多（？）

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先說，這些都是我個人的意見，你看著參考就好！

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第一章

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整個故事走向都沒問題，開頭很穩，直接進入主題蠻不錯的。

130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC2rUjExkd1

唯一一個讓我比較在意的點就是標點符號。

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建議每句話後面都要有句號。即使讀者看的時候會自動把標點符號矯正過來，但如果上一句有句號，下一句又突然沒有，這樣排版也很怪、不美觀，對吧？

更不用說，人物在說話的時候，也要有句號了。

後面這點在第一章更常見。

舉例來說：

小明說：「我今天要回家吃飯。」

飯後面加了個句號對吧？代表他說完了這句話。

但作者你除了後面是「？」或「！」的時候會加以外，其餘的句子都沒加。

130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPKgGAXlfOQ

標點符號真的很重要，有蠻多讀者在看到不正確的標點符號時就不會想再繼續看下去了。

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以及，刪節號是六個點一起。

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然後我記得繁體中文好像沒有關於「‘’‘’」這個標點符號的用法，你如果要引用，最好還是用「」這個。

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這個點在後面第二章，人物說話時更嚴重。

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只有簡體字在人物說話時是用“”。

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第二章。

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一樣標點符號的問題。

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有一段我很在意，就是江楓跟鐘鉉把蔣晨拖去廁所打的那段，你描述的是「廁所離教室並不遠，對江楓還有鐘鉉來說是一個打人的好去處。」

130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfI6fjpdGSD

我不知道是不是我的閱讀理解有誤還是什麼

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但在我這裡看來，這段的意思是「廁所跟教室離得近，所以方便打人。」

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但通常這種學生之間的打架不應該會去偏僻一點的地方嗎？？？

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這只是我疑惑的一個點而已。如果你本來就是這個意思那當我沒說。

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因為後面看起來應該都是重複的問題了，我就不多說了。

劇情上沒什麼太大的問題，標點符號的問題比較大。

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