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從台灣搭飛機回香港後回到家裡,吃完晚飯已經差不多11點了。8964 copyright protection332PENANAk1b5bC1Q3i 維尼
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啟動電腦的時候,看到屏幕竟然有點不習慣呢!8964 copyright protection332PENANASbS6zved8E 維尼
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要整理一個星期沒打掃的家、收拾行李和伴手禮,去完旅行要做的事情真多呢!今天的日記就只可以水更新(抱歉了。)8964 copyright protection332PENANAPvnq4XVdDo 維尼
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這個星期,心得募集又多了幾篇新投稿。我都有看,當下體會到充滿缺點的自己,打擊也十分大。感覺好像,自己寫了差不多10年的垃圾呢。8964 copyright protection332PENANAlprRzN15M6 維尼
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我的問題可以統整為以下幾點吧:336Please respect copyright.PENANAc8XgvUwnSu
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不合理的劇情8964 copyright protection332PENANASgUDZaB9pN 維尼
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碎片化、平淡、日常化、欠缺張力的劇情8964 copyright protection332PENANALn212tUqNJ 維尼
角色形象不鮮明8964 copyright protection332PENANA9Egaab9xxW 維尼
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另外,旅行的時候我認真想過,到底要寫怎樣的小說。8964 copyright protection332PENANASSy3vvepWh 維尼
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『你只要做回自己就好了。』8964 copyright protection332PENANA5tdyGamTuF 維尼
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用心寫自己的小說,自然就會得到知音的認同。8964 copyright protection332PENANASejZGZIpqv 維尼
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然後,新的故事避免犯上以上的錯誤就好了。寫壞了兩本小說,以後盡可能不讓小說變得垃圾就好了。8964 copyright protection332PENANAm5204FFXQd 維尼
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說著說著,現在就很晚了。我滿桌都是從台灣買回來的東西。8964 copyright protection332PENANA3INM8sb3YX 維尼
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陸續會寫遊記和飛行報告。8964 copyright protection332PENANA0YwJfBNVKn 維尼
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心得募集那裡,我盡量每天回覆一篇,也歡迎大家繼續投稿喔。讓大家久等,抱歉了。8964 copyright protection332PENANA8gLfrnFwcw 維尼
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至於小說,目前努力靠寫日記摸鍵盤重拾手感。8964 copyright protection332PENANAGwAlMAhB40 維尼
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今天就到這裡吧。晚安。8964 copyright protection332PENANACjOKBP3z1d 維尼
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