說真的,我完全沒想到這創挑才剛發出來一天,就有超過十個人參加⋯⋯75Please respect copyright.PENANADjruec00Ca
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我當初會辦這個創挑,起因其實是我班上的男同學唱了一首歌詞非常粗俗的歌⋯⋯我不理解為何這種歌詞會受人歡迎,所以想知道大家對歌詞的審美觀。而事實也證明,問題出在我班上的男同學⋯⋯75Please respect copyright.PENANA5MEWOuWXWn
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獎金的部分,我讓每個人都拿到差不多的錢(前三名有多一些)。至於⋯⋯我一開始投了5000,現在收回2650,應該沒有人有意見吧⋯⋯75Please respect copyright.PENANAnCCVXz7oQW
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總之呢,感謝各位參加我的創挑!另外,心羽有些話要跟大家說:75Please respect copyright.PENANA3Gt4hh8geM
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最後想和大家分享一首一直在心底迴響我心底的歌。75Please respect copyright.PENANAXcVSweMolJ
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歌開頭這樣唱:75Please respect copyright.PENANASIxiHlQg1Q
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空白於生活的軌跡75Please respect copyright.PENANAyFa76qPyKK
沉寂於模糊的感性75Please respect copyright.PENANAx2yZAxWGwN
清醒從晝夜到黎明75Please respect copyright.PENANAfVmB3XPCA9
今天沒呼吸的心情75Please respect copyright.PENANAJgCSnK4DYk
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那一句「今天沒呼吸的心情」瞬間讓我心頭一震。人有時真的會莫名地喘不過氣,不是因為生理,而是心裡的重壓。歌詞把這樣的情緒:「被標價、被陳列成商品」、「被剝奪誠實的權利」,全部唱進來 。它像是一面鏡子,映出很多我們在日常不敢說出口的焦慮和疏離。75Please respect copyright.PENANAykfTwV43NV
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這段特別震撼:75Please respect copyright.PENANAIDLbMuVs0p
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鏡面映照我的身影 是被陳列商品75Please respect copyright.PENANA1r1rdBbOQJ
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拿掉價格跟標籤 剩下什麼而已?75Please respect copyright.PENANAqW8KNfZa91
真實藏在哪裡75Please respect copyright.PENANAVTjOY7Cofp
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好多時候,我們無意識地戴上標籤、表演或隱藏自己,只為迎合別人的目光。這首歌提醒我:「我的真實不該被貼標籤或販售,我也需要被看見、被理解。」75Please respect copyright.PENANAuvAwhV1lNc
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有人聽完也說:「這首歌好有動畫 OP 的感覺」、「詞跟曲都很棒…情緒感覺沒有完全出來」 ,留言裡有感動、有共鳴,深刻又複雜,像是黑暗中有種被撫慰的力量。這種力量,反而更真實、更絮絮不休,像是朋友溫柔地告訴你:「你沒事,有人懂你。」75Please respect copyright.PENANAKxb15Lyghc
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我自己最近也碰到一段迷惘的過渡期。每天都被作業、考試、未來規劃追著跑,時間像是被拆碎、被要求不同的「成績」和「價值」塞滿。久了,會忽略自己真正喜歡什麼、想聽什麼、想看什麼。這首歌突然間像顆炸彈引爆,我忍不住在床上反覆聽,閉上眼,讓歌聲把我拉回內心深處,讓每一次呼吸都有重量、有取捨、有自我對話。75Please respect copyright.PENANA2gb1Q6eaFB
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歌的後段,歌詞是:75Please respect copyright.PENANAuzFMyV00a5
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被剝奪 誠實的權利75Please respect copyright.PENANA3716h3QHu6
被迫去 附和的言語75Please respect copyright.PENANADe6zLmwCaE
被教導 呼吸的規矩75Please respect copyright.PENANAmJ0HAtOGsh
今天沒活著的心情75Please respect copyright.PENANAzyL3YONq90
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那一句「被教導呼吸的規矩」,彷彿點醒了我:我們被教導的生存方式,其實是被約束成一種模板。可如果我們能鬆開規矩,讓「呼吸」回歸本能的自由,也許就能再一次覺得心跳在動,也許能活成自己真實的樣子。75Please respect copyright.PENANAyLHo6wicow
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我好希望大家都去聽聽這首歌。如果你剛好也有「喘不過來」的壓力,或者覺得自己被標籤、被期待、被快節奏淹沒,就讓這首歌陪伴你。哪怕只是短短三分鐘,也能帶來一點安慰、一點釋放。音樂有魔力,它讓看不見的痛被看見,也讓看似找不到出口的壓抑,出現一絲縫隙。75Please respect copyright.PENANAv5VnAavuto
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最後,用這首歌帶給我的信念作結:75Please respect copyright.PENANAiutmshXUjT
真實,值得被呼吸。75Please respect copyright.PENANAfkeqDD3TKs
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今天沒呼吸的心情75Please respect copyright.PENANAFAypSWb10o
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嗯⋯⋯感覺結語不是我在寫XD。75Please respect copyright.PENANAgM9EOZLhTg
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(等等,還有件事:經過這次創挑,我發現很多人跟我一樣是三無Marblue的粉絲!我以後可能會辦跟三無相關的創挑,所以如果跟我一樣身為三無粉絲的人,可以關注我一下,交個朋友!)75Please respect copyright.PENANA4XFrY7r8YX